The latest versions

What's in every reel

• Faces. Every on-camera second is measured, the same way as the B-roll: shake, and the face steady in frame. Shaky stretches went under B-roll. The faces are now tighter medium shots. The build refuses anything that fails.
• B-roll. 2–3.5 s per shot instead of 1 s. New from your April shoot: the stilts capsule at dusk, the bedroom, the skylight reveal, their HQ. Sea, desert and garden from their own reel.
• Voices. A voice check found 3 spots where someone else talked under an answer. All three are gone: the 'Okay' before Rani's 'I swear', the 'Thank you' over Fawaz's «برافو عليك», and the 'Yeah, that's a good one' over Rani's 'Beach'.
• Ending. Theirs, slower: three shots of two beats each, Ai.Beyot's logo, the white card.

1 · Matthew Hoag

Interstellar Plus · the festival, life on tour, a feeling of home

What changed

• APPROVED. On the client page. Company, the pauses tightened.

2 · Rani Kalan

Starlight's project manager · the call to Lebanon

What changed

• Your picks (v10). 'I'm in one of the capsules' → fully equipped: the shower, the bath · 'high-end apartment' → the furnished rooms by the sea · 'a finishing like this' → Built For Comfort · «جيت إنتو حطيتوها» → the capsule towed down the road, then the crane at the festival · outro: their HQ at dusk.
• Kept. Same words, faces, the 24 H.

3 · Mohamed Fawaz

Production manager · small caravans in Lebanon

What changed

• Your Matthew pause note (8 Oct). Fawaz: 0.30 s → 0.15 s under the B-roll. Everything else as before.
• Your picks (v12). 'The interior' → Portable Luxury, Built For Comfort · 'even the LED' → the LED ceiling, Panoramic Design · «أبني أوضة… ودهان» → their workers on the grille, Hazem putting up the sign · «جبت الأوضة» → towed in, Foldable Units · «تحط العفش وأنا أرتاح» → the furnished rooms, her at the set table.

4 · Abu Bakr

Production · the first lounge like this

What changed

• Your Matthew pause note (8 Oct). After «كأنك في الفضاء»: 0.70 s → 0.46 s. Everything else as before.
• Your picks (v10). 'The legendary look' → the capsule on its stilts · 'the design' → Panoramic Design, the kitchen · 'like you're in space' → their HQ lit at dusk · 'on the beach' → the capsule by the sea, the dining room over the sea · outro: the Ai.Beyot letters.

5 · Mohammed Hazem

CEO · rebuilt from his cleanest sentences

What changed

• Your Matthew pause note (8 Oct). After the hook 'serviced apartment': 0.65 s → 0.43 s. Everything else as before.
• Your picks (v13). The card on 'serviced apartment' → their furnished rooms · 'finishing, glass, panoramic view' → the basin, Panoramic Design · 'on the sea' → the capsule by the sea · 'for every use' → the sizes, the capsule at dusk · 'he comes in, relaxes' → her at the set table · outro: their HQ signs.

6 · Everyone

Four questions · Mohammed last

What changed

• Your Matthew pause note (8 Oct). After Matthew's 'Beautiful.': 0.76 s → 0.47 s. Everything else as before.
• Your picks (v11). 'Beautiful' → the capsule on its stilts · «finish حلو، نظافة» → Built For Comfort · 'looking at the sea' → the capsule by the sea, the rooms over the sea · 'everywhere in the world' → the garden, the sea, the desert («كل حتة في العالم», their own words) · outro: towed down the road, the Ai.Beyot letters.

Your calls

• Older versions. Last night's six (v4, and v2 for Fawaz and Abu Bakr) stay on your Desktop. Nothing was overwritten.
• Waiting on you. Internet logos and festival footage (Starlight, EXIT, Interstellar Plus, Ai.Beyot's official logo). Nothing is downloaded until you say yes.
• Names. Is the bald production man Abu Bakr Ibrahim? The card says so until you correct it.
• Nothing posted. Nothing is posted or in the Content System, and no credits were spent.