Rani's 'DJs', fixed

What's in every reel

• Every cut, checked. All six, on the sound that ships: one voice at a time, no join on a face, no crumb of a cut word on either side, no clipped first or last letters, no dead air.
• Faces. Every on-camera second is measured, the same way as the B-roll: shake, and the face steady in frame. Shaky stretches went under B-roll. The faces are now tighter medium shots. The build refuses anything that fails.
• B-roll. 2–3.5 s per shot instead of 1 s. New from your April shoot: the stilts capsule at dusk, the bedroom, the skylight reveal, their HQ. Sea, desert and garden from their own reel.
• Ending. Theirs, slower: three shots of two beats each, Ai.Beyot's logo, the white card.

1 · Matthew Hoag

Interstellar Plus · the festival, life on tour, a feeling of home

What changed

• APPROVED. On the client page. Company, the pauses tightened.

2 · Rani Kalan

Starlight's project manager · the call to Lebanon

What changed

• Your note (8 Oct, again): 'DJs' cut off. The cut was ending inside the word ('the Class A DJ-'): the end of 'DJs' had been read as an 'uh' and taken out. Now the whole word plays, its 's', a breath, then 'we're gonna sit'.
• Calmer B-roll. 'I'm in one of the capsules' → one held shot of their panoramic sunroof (was four quick shots under flashing words) · «جيت إنتو حطيتوها بالـ crane» → the capsule towed in, then the crane held (was two quick tows).
• Pause. 'Starlight Festival, … and I'm in': 0.36 s → 0.22 s, under the B-roll (your Matthew note).
• Your picks (v10). 'I'm in one of the capsules' → fully equipped: the shower, the bath · 'high-end apartment' → the furnished rooms by the sea · 'a finishing like this' → Built For Comfort · «جيت إنتو حطيتوها» → the capsule towed down the road, then the crane at the festival · outro: their HQ at dusk.

3 · Mohamed Fawaz

Production manager · small caravans in Lebanon

What changed

• Audio check (8 Oct). Two crumbs of cut words are gone: the end of «يعني» before «حتى الـ LED», and the end of «أكيد» before «أنا بموت بالموضوع ده».
• Face. «برافو عليك» was a jump on his face → now their Ai.BEYOT sign at dusk (your pick).
• Your picks (v12). 'The interior' → Portable Luxury, Built For Comfort · 'even the LED' → the LED ceiling, Panoramic Design · «أبني أوضة… ودهان» → their workers on the grille, Hazem putting up the sign · «جبت الأوضة» → towed in, Foldable Units · «تحط العفش وأنا أرتاح» → the furnished rooms, her at the set table.

4 · Abu Bakr

Production · the first lounge like this

What changed

• Audio check (8 Oct). His first line had a piece of «بالديزاين» in it → now «أول مرة أشوف لاونج زي كده، بالشكل الخرافي», as the script.
• Face. The cut in that line is under B-roll now: the capsule on its stilts, then the curved glass (your picks).
• Your picks (v10). 'The legendary look' → the capsule on its stilts · 'the design' → Panoramic Design, the kitchen · 'like you're in space' → their HQ lit at dusk · 'on the beach' → the capsule by the sea, the dining room over the sea · outro: the Ai.Beyot letters.

5 · Mohammed Hazem

CEO · rebuilt from his cleanest sentences

What changed

• Audio check (8 Oct). «الأغاني ورا، فيجي يقعد هنا»: the cut stopped inside «ورا» and let in «ها» from the removed words, now whole · «أزرق أو بيض، بس هنا»: a tail of the removed «الصراحة» is out.
• Your picks (v13). The card on 'serviced apartment' → their furnished rooms · 'finishing, glass, panoramic view' → the basin, Panoramic Design · 'on the sea' → the capsule by the sea · 'for every use' → the sizes, the capsule at dusk · 'he comes in, relaxes' → her at the set table · outro: their HQ signs.

6 · Everyone

Four questions · Mohammed last

What changed

• Faces (8 Oct). Four jumps on faces are covered: Rani's 'I swear' (the door logo holds to the cut, as in his film), Fawaz's «برافو عليك» (the Ai.BEYOT sign), Matthew's 'Smart.' (the stilts capsule), and Matthew's '…to the temple,' (the pyramids on the horizon).
• Pause. 'Smart. … Beautiful.' had 0.9 s of dead air → now the same short beat as 'Innovation. Smart.'
• Your picks (v11). 'Beautiful' → the capsule on its stilts · «finish حلو، نظافة» → Built For Comfort · 'looking at the sea' → the capsule by the sea, the rooms over the sea · 'everywhere in the world' → the garden, the sea, the desert («كل حتة في العالم», their own words) · outro: towed down the road, the Ai.Beyot letters.

Your calls

• Matthew (approved). Untouched. He still has 3 small jumps on his face (0:01, 0:17, 0:24). Say the word and they go under B-roll like the others; the client page would then get the new version.
• Older versions. Last night's six (v4, and v2 for Fawaz and Abu Bakr) stay on your Desktop. Nothing was overwritten.
• Waiting on you. Internet logos and festival footage (Starlight, EXIT, Interstellar Plus, Ai.Beyot's official logo). Nothing is downloaded until you say yes.
• Names. Is the bald production man Abu Bakr Ibrahim? The card says so until you correct it.
• Nothing posted. Nothing is posted or in the Content System, and no credits were spent.