Ai.Beyot × Starlight Festival · 8 Oct · Matthew v24
Matthew: Company, tighter pauses
Matthew v24 (top): Company, with five pauses under the B-roll tightened slightly, 0.9 s shorter overall. Every word is whole. The one pause on his face stays, because cutting it would make his face jump. The other five films are below, unchanged.
1 · Matthew HoagInterstellar Plus · the festival, life on tour, a feeling of home
2 · Rani KalanStarlight's project manager · the call to Lebanon
3 · Mohamed FawazProduction manager · small caravans in Lebanon
4 · Abu BakrProduction · the first lounge like this
5 · Mohammed HazemCEO · rebuilt from his cleanest sentences
6 · EveryoneFour questions · Mohammed last
What's in every reel
- Faces. Every on-camera second is measured, the same way as the B-roll: shake, and the face steady in frame. Shaky stretches went under B-roll. The faces are now tighter medium shots. The build refuses anything that fails.
- B-roll. 2–3.5 s per shot instead of 1 s. New from your April shoot: the stilts capsule at dusk, the bedroom, the skylight reveal, their HQ. Sea, desert and garden from their own reel.
- Voices. A voice check found 3 spots where someone else talked under an answer. All three are gone: the 'Okay' before Rani's 'I swear', the 'Thank you' over Fawaz's «برافو عليك», and the 'Yeah, that's a good one' over Rani's 'Beach'.
- Ending. Theirs, slower: three shots of two beats each, Ai.Beyot's logo, the white card.
1 · Matthew Hoag
What changed
- Your notes (v24). Music: Company, the Ordinary Product track. Bieber's vocal is taken out under Matthew and comes in on the outro drop. Pauses: 'a big event, | the first time' 0.29 → 0.16 s · 'electronic | music' 0.41 → 0.19 · 'That's | almost' 0.29 → 0.16 · 'almost | every second day' 0.50 → 0.23 · 'day. | So you spend' 0.57 → 0.40.
- Kept. Same words, B-roll and faces as the version you approved.
2 · Rani Kalan
What changed
- Your picks (v10). 'I'm in one of the capsules' → fully equipped: the shower, the bath · 'high-end apartment' → the furnished rooms by the sea · 'a finishing like this' → Built For Comfort · «جيت إنتو حطيتوها» → the capsule towed down the road, then the crane at the festival · outro: their HQ at dusk.
- Kept. Same words, faces, the 24 H.
3 · Mohamed Fawaz
What changed
- Your picks (v12). 'The interior' → Portable Luxury, Built For Comfort · 'even the LED' → the LED ceiling, Panoramic Design · «أبني أوضة… ودهان» → their workers on the grille, Hazem putting up the sign · «جبت الأوضة» → towed in, Foldable Units · «تحط العفش وأنا أرتاح» → the furnished rooms, her at the set table.
- Kept. Same words and faces.
4 · Abu Bakr
What changed
- Your picks (v10). 'The legendary look' → the capsule on its stilts · 'the design' → Panoramic Design, the kitchen · 'like you're in space' → their HQ lit at dusk · 'on the beach' → the capsule by the sea, the dining room over the sea · outro: the Ai.Beyot letters.
- Kept. Same words and faces.
5 · Mohammed Hazem
What changed
- Your picks (v13). The card on 'serviced apartment' → their furnished rooms · 'finishing, glass, panoramic view' → the basin, Panoramic Design · 'on the sea' → the capsule by the sea · 'for every use' → the sizes, the capsule at dusk · 'he comes in, relaxes' → her at the set table · outro: their HQ signs.
- Kept. Same words and faces; the festival desert on 'camping in the desert'.
6 · Everyone
What changed
- Your picks (v11). 'Beautiful' → the capsule on its stilts · «finish حلو، نظافة» → Built For Comfort · 'looking at the sea' → the capsule by the sea, the rooms over the sea · 'everywhere in the world' → the garden, the sea, the desert («كل حتة في العالم», their own words) · outro: towed down the road, the Ai.Beyot letters.
- Kept. The four questions, the same answers.
Your calls
- Older versions. Last night's six (v4, and v2 for Fawaz and Abu Bakr) stay on your Desktop. Nothing was overwritten.
- Waiting on you. Internet logos and festival footage (Starlight, EXIT, Interstellar Plus, Ai.Beyot's official logo). Nothing is downloaded until you say yes.
- Names. Is the bald production man Abu Bakr Ibrahim? The card says so until you correct it.
- Nothing posted. Nothing is posted or in the Content System, and no credits were spent.